OK – I have a first draft of the article! I shared it with my kind colleague who agreed to review it this weekend. I will be showing it to the Cliffster tonight. I previewed the conclusion for him this morning and found out my sentences are too verbose. This doesn’t surprise me – I’ve always had a hard time writing out my thoughts initially. I’m much better at editing. That previous bit started off as one long sentence with parentheses and dashes. But there’s a complete article and it has a title! Wow.

It needs a lot of editing.